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IN WHICH I DELVE INTO WHY PERFECT CHARACTERS ARE BORING

9/25/2025

 
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Perfect characters are dull. I don't mean noble, courageous, or morally good. Those can all make for compelling characters. Even heroes like Captain America aren't perfect. He's stubborn to a fault, sometimes blindly loyal, unwilling to compromise, and even reckless when he believes he's right. It's those flaws that make him human and make his moments of heroism land with impact. What I mean by perfect is the kind of character who is flawlessly kind, endlessly patient, never wrong, never tempted, never messy. Unless the character in question is Jesus Christ, perfect characters give readers no reason to care. There's no tension about whether they'll rise or fall, no emotional payoff when they change because they never do, and they don't have to.

I think most of us know this on some level, even before we start learning craft terms. Long before I ever read a book about writing, I instinctively gave my characters flaws and room to grow. I didn't have the vocabulary for it back then, but I somehow knew in my gut that a character with nothing to overcome was a character readers wouldn't bother rooting for. Not only that, but it would probably annoy them enough to close the book and let it collect dust on the shelf. It wasn't until I began studying writing more seriously that I learned what to call it. Words like character arc and the lie the character believes (misbelief) gave me a way to understand why those elements make stories so satisfying.

Recently, I had to explain this to someone whose WIP protagonist was a little too perfect. In trying to help them figure out their character's arc, I found myself breaking down something I had never put into words before: you can't have a compelling plot without a character's misbelief. The flawed way characters see the world is what gives them something to fight against inside themselves. It's what makes their choices hard, their failures painful, and their victories meaningful. Without it, the story simply happens to them.

Whatever form it takes, the key takeaway is that this misbelief is the invisible engine behind the story. It drives the character's choices and guarantees that when the plot throws obstacles in their way, those obstacles hurt because they hit the character where it matters most. Think about Elizabeth Bennet and Mr. Darcy in Pride and Prejudice. Elizabeth believes Darcy is arrogant and cruel, that his pride makes him unworthy of her respect. Darcy believes Elizabeth and her family are beneath him, that his superior judgment is always correct. Their arcs work because both of them must confront those misbeliefs. When they finally do, we get one of the most satisfying resolutions in literature. Thank you, Jane Austen.

In my WIP, Of Beasts and Blood, both Kaelen and Maeve start with the same misbelief: that all monsters are monsters. It fuels Kaelen's devotion to the Order and justifies every blade he draws as a veilwalker. It makes Maeve hide who she is, believing that if anyone knew the truth, they would destroy her. Their arcs are about dismantling that belief, discovering that the world is not that simple, that there is a difference between what is monstrous and what is merely feared. That revelation is what sets their final choices in motion.

That moment of growth, the instant a character sees through their misbelief, is the story's real aha moment. It's what allows them to finally face the external obstacle and win, not just by force but by becoming someone new. Without that shift, the battle might be loud and dramatic and suspenseful, but it will not mean anything. With it, even a quiet victory can feel earth-shattering. That's why perfect characters are boring. A character who has nothing to learn can never give us that moment of transformation, and transformation is what makes a story stay with us long after we have turned the last page.

So, if you're still here, I'd like to raise a toast to all the imperfect and flawed characters that make stories unforgettable!

—Sam ♡


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